RSS - PostsI AM SAD — First Poem
Posted by CHAND on August 21, 2007
I am sad
I don’t know why ?
I see tears every where.
Selfish wolves all around,
They come they prey do they care ?
Oh leave the poor
Unknown of the world around.
Blind , he can’t see
Trapped in the vicious circle,
He never wants to be in.
I am sad
I don’t know why ?
Evil souls let loose,
Did they get you ?
Souls far from compassion,
Laughing at the ruins of the life.
The false flourishing
Evil standing tall,
against the feeble good.
Sad, truth lost its meaning
I am sad
I don’t know why ?
They cry they complain,
Thrown in the darkness,
Searching for the light,
Standing alone they fight.
Let there be happiness,
It comes from within,
You cannot seek it.
Love the world, transform it
shrikant said
well a good picture of the bad world
Ankit said
Naaiiiccceee !!
Maruti Borker said
nice one
Karan said
It was good 4 a start.. keep going!
Speed said
awesome dude …..
Himank Sharma said
More than a poem.. It looks like a song.. A Rock song, if i should say.. Good one da.. Keep writing more n more of ‘em…
keshavdube said
love the world transform it.—-beautiful poem.
abbulugadu said
aha! IIIT’s got a new Tennyson ..nice! Ending accha tha
Namrata said
Fab poem.Poetry is catching up so fast with everyone in blogosphere these days.Keep blogging!
prateekgv said
“Love the world, transform it”
phani chaitanya said
Let there be happiness
It comes from within …
You cannot seek it
Love the world transform it ..
awesome dude …. nice one … keep blogging !!!
Manish Arora said
Well I won’t say dat it wz a gud poem for a start … actually it was gud neways ….. dis is sth vich i wz xpecting frm u .. nt sm lv poem or sth …. dis is a touching poem showing us the bitter reality of the world … keep going on.
vipul said
a very nice attempt…..keeep writing more of ‘em
guessme said
i was not able to follow which were rhyming words …
figures of speech were also not used properly …
guessme said
meaning was good …
Bhanukiran said
A very nice poem and the last stanza was the best part of the poem yaar Continue blogging…
prashasti said
Later or sooner,willingly or forcibly you got to accept the reality ……. but thats the attitude..’love world and tranform it’…………….
nice poem……..and agree wid manish……..this is expected out of u……